HA! That Kingdom Hearts one was great. I think it would be hilarious if Square made an announcement like this on April fools day just mess with fans (Myself included).
Great video by the way.
Definatley worthy of daily feature. Likeable characters, great writing, great voice acting, and lot's of creativity as well. This cartoon definitely proofs that you don't need to be adult and edgy on here to make something great. Don't get me wrong I don't mind cartoons that have swearing and inappropriate jokes here and there, but it's just nice to see a cartoon that's innocent, but is also able to make me smile and laugh just as well as some of the adult cartoons on here. Your really an inspiration to me man, keep up the good work. ;o)
Man This cracks me up, just seeing the guy in front of the play screen, and making a serious face is just so funny on it's own. Just hearing that booming voice saying all those things about his co worker is just beautiful. That laugh at the end I just completely lost it cause honestly I wasn't expecting that. Please JonnyUtah don't ever stop making cartoons they always crack me up no matter what mood i'm in. :)
so let me get this straight this detective tells a a nice young lady to "Shut the f--k up" spends more time on drawing pretty ladies than solving crimes, and when a huge fight is going on between two detectives he has nothing better to do than draw a poopy butt?
BEST DETECTIVE EVER 9/10
I liked the idea of an old cartoon character reviewing current cartoons but I feel the references of Pikachu and Super Mario brothers was really out of place I know it was there to make some valid points but what el-cid said isn't he suppose to be a an old fart reviewing new shows does he review video games too? I don't know anyone that old would know Mario and Pokemon well enough to reference them like that unless they had grand kids that played those games. I think what would've been better if Doggy referenced older cartoons from the 30's and 20's like Betty Boop, Popeye, and koko the clown to make some comparisons to the newer shows. Since he's an older guy (Well...dog) it wouldn't hurt to do some more research on what was popular back in those days of the old classic cartoons. Don't be afraid to ask your grandparents on what those days where like they could help you come up with some funny gags for your show and maybe they'll tell you funny stories they had experienced once. I'm not saying they need to help write this series 24/7 i'm just saying in case you run out of ideas or having writers block just ask them about it or ask your folks about it whichever one works for you. Another reason why I don't like how you referenced Pokemon and Mario is because it kinda feels like your taking the easy way out, and what I mean by that is when someone doesn't know how to write a joke or a scene in something they just make a reference to something that's popular like in those new Dr. Seuss movies (specifically The Lorax and Cat In The Hat) where they have all these pop cultural references that are painfully in your face. I know Mario and Pokemon are fantastic video games I'm a huge Nintendo fan myself and I really really hate comparing them to the pop culture but Mario and Pokemon are so popular now that when I see it in something that's trying to be original and different on how it's reviewing shows and it just gets referenced just like the way it was here it just feels awkward and kinda feels like pandering to the fans. But to be fair it's not really an easy fix because like I said earlier your were making some points on what the show is like, but here's what i think you should do if Doggy's going to reference something like Mario and Pokemon if he's gonna make comparisons to something like Mario and Pokemon make it more obvious that there's a reason for why he's reverencing them make it more clear on how he knows Pokemon and Mario because what i said a while ago maybe his grand kids played those games and he talks about his kids always sitting down in bean bean chairs playing the old Super SNES while he's sitting in his big couch reading the newspaper. Where it goes something like this "Whoa these worlds in Adventure time are just like those games my grand kids played back in the day, Those games with those colorful critters that try to electrocute each other or "Those games with them plumbers that jump on blocks all day," or I don't know something like that. You could even make it where he pronounces the name of the games wrong like instead of Pokemon he says "Poke-mans Hoke-mon" OR with Mario Brothers "the Popeye brothers" which is funny because popeye was around those old black and white days and Mario originally started off as a Popeye video game during the olden days. Other than that I liked it, the animation was okay, and the dog's reaction to Adventure time was funny. I'm not trying to mean or anything I just think what I've told you will really help you out. Keep it up bud just make sure you have fun, but also don't regard constructive criticism either take care.
I think your animation could use a little more time to be worked on, but it's decent enough to get your story across, and your facial expressions are pretty good. I think you have a lot of good potential of a great series here. One thing I really liked was when it showed the setting of New York while it was raining outside, there was no talking or any music it was just the sounds of rain, thunder and the two people working in the lab, very nice start. I also liked how the bad guy was introduced all you heard was a door opening and footsteps without anyone saying anything that was some pretty good build up right there. One of the biggest problems I had was actually was with the scene where the guy shoots the couple of scientists it was more focused on the guy and not so much on the woman right next to him I didn't hear her scream or fall down or anything I couldn't tell if the bad guy even shot her or not, and when he walked over to the boy near the end and that boy was freaking out I couldn't tell if those panic noises where coming from the kid or that it was the woman and it would cut to a scene with her either shot but not quite dead yet and was about to yell something like "NO! Please just don't hurt them!" or just kneeling down on the floor trying to see if her partner was still alive. I think adding something like that would really help and give her some fair screen time. Another thing I felt could've been done better was with the audio of the antagonist. I'm not trying to be so quick to judge because audio is kinda tricky with voices and music sometimes, but when the sound of the weapon the kid was holding started making noise along with the music it's kinda hard to hear him at times. Other than that i'm glad to see another young animator getting his work out there and sharing it with all of us. Keep making more man and, good luck with the rest of the series.
McGoombas/McDonalds XD! I really like this one! The fight at the end was so well done every group got there fair share of epicness another great vid man.
A Brilliant Christmas Special that We should watch every Year! :)
Wow! Fantastic! A great Video from Beginning to end. The opening was dramatic, it automatically sucked you in and new where it was going.
The Race was both entertaining and fun and it also got in a fair amount of comedy as well. I really enjoyed this series even before i joined newgrounds.
Alvin all I gotta say is that your videos are fantastic. Your writing is great you really know how to tell a good story and you have such a great balance between Mario and Sonic. Your Videos have really inspired me a lot with how to tell a story and being able to have a good balance of Drama and Comedy I know you quit your series, and i'm a little bummed out but I do respect your decision because i get it animation's a lot of work.
but I wish you the best of luck in the future thanks so much for giving us a great series and I hope there will be more great Movies like this in the future.
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